"A hole in the floor may not be much." He sat looking at the floor for a long time. Finally, he fell. I ran to him and with all my might I reassured him. When he got up and walked into the shadows, he stopped. Light glistened on his forehead. Every move he made was uncertain. He was so shaken. I all this time had not made a sound. He turned to me and nodded. "Good night, Mr." I said.
(The pic is a random page from Harper Lee's To Kill a Mockingbird. Words were taken from it to form a very short story.)
I loved the start! But the ending line was so weird I didn't get it. You see, the hardest part of this game is to let the tiny story within make sense. Keep going though :) it's a wonderful inspiration ;)
ReplyDeleteYes .. The end is so abrupt and open. I needed like another 2 or 3 lines to make a better ending :) But I like the idea a lot; it's really interesting =)
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